So a friend of mine took a job running innovation and digital at a large food company and asked me to help him redesign their website. I did a 1 hour quick and dirty lesson on online direct response techniques. How did it do it? I took out a newspaper.
What!? You ask, a newspaper? Yes, a newspaper.
Long ago, our friendly publishers learned the art of eliciting fear and getting people to buy papers. By looking at how papers are laid out and headlines are written and pages structured, we can learn a lot. We can also learn a few things that don’t really work anymore.
1. Newspaper expect the person to read just the headline, photo/caption, first and last paragraph so everything is repeated in there. AKA: the equivalent size of most blog posts. Lesson: people have short attention spans, clearly state your value proposition and catch interest early and restate it when you close.
2. Subject line, photo, text is the order of the paper. Normally your eyes will read the headline, look at the picture to support it and then read so your visuals and headline are more important than your content. (sometimes you look to the picture first if its laid out to the right or left of the story. If the headline is above the photo, you tend to look at the headline first). Lesson: Your visuals and headline are 80% of your content. The rest is supporting filler.
3. All news stories have quotes. Lots of them. Even if they don’t make any sense. People like hearing things that come from 3rd party sources to confirm validity, even if its bullshit. Also quotes from people with positions of power or at well known companies are more valuable since its more believable. Lesson: testimonials are very important, especially if they come from people that have credibility (or name recognition) in the consumers eyes.
4. Front page stories are always continued on the inside. This is to get you to flip through the paper, not to read the rest of the story but to look at the ads. Lesson: if you have long content break it into multiple parts so the user has more page views. Secondly, the shorter each piece is the greater chance it’ll be read and the user will want more vs. asking when will it end.
5. Your headline tells the story. If a headline reads: “Ford on deathknell” or “Car company about to crash” or “government bailout for ford”, each headline tells a different story even though it says the same thing. How so?
In the first one, Ford is the subject and deathknell supports it so the goal of the story is to show ford is dying. The goal is to spark fear that ford is dying – to get you to ask yourself a specific question about ford.
In the second one, ‘car company’ is the subject but the keyword is crash. Their goal is to get you wondering which car company and why. Notice no mention of Ford. The goal is to get you interested in who/why – to get you to ask an open question.
In the 3rd one the subject is the government bailout, ford is an afterthought because government bailout is written first. The goal here is to get you thinking about the government, not about ford.
Lesson: the order, subject and description tell the story more than the actual story. Apply this to your tag lines and keyword text as well as your text that shows up on the search engines and on your site. Understand the purpose of what you’re saying not just the point.